雅思大作文范文及解析:只给运动员提供专业设施

一些国家为了取得国际上成功的方式是通过建造专门的设施给顶尖运动员而不是向大众提供可用的体育设施，你认为是积极的还是消极的

这是一道利弊类大作文，讨论的是给顶尖运动员而非大众建造专门体育设施的利弊。利弊类文章，需要强调在论证上体现合理性，即在具体的分析中，明确能体现出一边的论述的确是大于另一边，或是利弊均等，而利弊是否有说服力并不取决于观点的数量，而是内容是否有说服力。审题像需要注意一点，题目让我们讨论的是“因为……所以做A没做B”的利弊，而不是讨论“做A”或者“做B”的好/坏处，因此不要跑偏了。下面月半鸭来和大家看下具体观点。

首先我们来看这样做的好处，有三方面。

一是想要在国际赛事中赢得比赛确实需要顶尖的运动员而非普通人，而培养顶尖的运动员则需要专门设施和团队保障，在人力物力有限的情况下，优先保障他们有利于取得好成绩。

二是一个国家如果能在重要的国际赛事上获胜，能够有助于激发民众的民族荣誉感和自豪感，同时那些冠军选手也能成为年轻人的榜样进而起到激励作用。

三是顶尖运动员和国际比赛的胜利往往也能带来许多经济收益。顶尖运动员们能够让更多人和商家关注到相关赛事，有了关注度后，国家无论是举办国内联赛还是承办国际联赛，都能通过门票、广告、基础建设甚至相关的旅游项目等来创造收入及就业岗位，这对经济发展是有益的。

然后再来看坏处，有两方面。

一是这样做确实没有惠及大众。用纳税人的钱建造体育设施仅仅给少数人使用，对于大众来说并不合理。

二是忽视基础体育设施的提供，不利于全民身体健康的保障，当民众想要锻炼却发现没有体育设施可用，无疑会打击其运动的积极性。

Compared with proffering sports facilities for common people, some countries lay more emphasis on the construction of professional facilities for elite sportsmen in order to succeed internationally. When talking about the merit and demerit of this development, I think the former may weigh far higher than the latter.

The benefits of this tendency can be perceived in many aspects. First and foremost, to cultivate more exceptional professional players plays a role in raising a nation’s status in the international arena and thus acquiring economic profit.If given training bases equipped with the latest devices and technology, the sportsmen are more competent to get the triumph on an international stage. The exalting glory proves the great competitiveness in sports and helps a country to stand more opportunities of biding for some major international sports events such as Olympic Games and Football World Cup. Not only do these events serve as the ideal platform to present a nation’s unique strengths, but also generate enormous economic value through the ticket sales, accommodation and visitor consumption. Moreover, hard-won success can also fulfill the educational function of the general public. There is no exaggeration to say that a champion in one important sports event never fails to inspire the citizens’ patriotism. The winner can set a role model for numerous youngsters who can learn some valuable characteristics from their hero such as diligence, self-discipline, persistence and so forth.

On the downside, the allocation of fiscal budget on advanced sports facilities designed for boosting the performance of professional players may only benefit a small group of people. It is common sense that the money from tax-payers should be spent for the interests of majority of the public. Besides, the inaccessibility of sufficient public sports facilities can be partially responsible for the decline of public enthusiasm for body-building.

To conclude, I believe it is worth advocating for countries to place value on nurturing professional athletes and providing them with cutting-edge facilities considering the economic and educational benefits. Meanwhile, these sporting venues should be open for the common occasionally so as to promote the public participation.  

proffer      提供

elite        精英

perceive    察觉，注意到

cultivate    培养

arena      舞台，竞技场

bid        竞标

patriotism  爱国心

diligence   勤奋

persistence  毅力，坚持

fiscal       政府财政的