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400-835-7866托福写作想要拿高分,其实开头段也是占非常重要的作用的。这里不仅仅是因为开头段第一眼就能看到,很多考官也是会根据开头段评分的。那么托福写作该如何将开头段写好呢?有哪些方式以及用词可以借鉴?
副词开头
推荐词语有:
obviously / undoubtedly
apparently / fortunately
clearly / unfortunately
incredibly / luckily
unluckily / surprisingly/frighteningly
例句:
Unfortunately, he tripped over and fell in the mud. =It is unfortunate that he tripped over and fell in the mud.
插入语开头
推荐插入语有:
no wonder,no doubt
in other words,in my opinion
in conclusion,in fact
as a matter of fact
例句:
Strangely enough, Jennifer does not enjoy sunshine and beach.
介词短语开头
用介词短语开头,表示句子谓语动词发生的时间、地点、方式、原因、条件。
On seeing him approach, the girl immediately turned her face to a shop window
pretending to look at something there.( 时间)
Around the corner, a crowd gathered.( 地点)
Unlike his father, Peter touches neither cigarettes nor alcohol.( 方式)
Due to the limit of seats, he was not accepted.( 原因)
In case of fire, use the stairways.( 条件)
重述法开头
所谓重述法,即是对关于这个话题的当前现状的重述。审完一篇作文的题目要求,有时候脑子里一时之间可能想不出应该如何展开思路,这种时候大家就可以用重述法来进行开头段落的撰写。
实例1:
Nowadays, people are facing more and more work-related stress. State the possible reasons for this phenomenon and make some recommendations about how to combat it.
思路分析:
本题的话题关于压力,那考生可从当前社会现象来考虑这个问题,考生不难想出当下对压力这一现象的情况,即很多人都在承受着或多或少的压力。可用it is generally believed that … 形式主语的句型。
开头段参考:
It is generally believed that white-collar as well as blue-collars workers are suffering from psychological and physical stress stemming from work.
实例2:
Environmental problem is too big for individual countries and individual people to address. In other words, we have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
思路分析:
本题话题为环境问题,考生也可用重述法对当前环境问题进行重述,这时可以用In modern society/ At present, 等表时间的介词短语来引导一个叙述句型。
开头段参考:
In modern society, environment related issues have confronted ecological scientists, government agencies and the general public.
托福 TOEFL的报考条件:多数美国高校要求总分 80-100 分区间;阅读、听力、语法、写作四项,机考为主。
| 项目 | 说明 | 备注 |
|---|---|---|
| 主办与承办 | 美国教育考试服务(ETS)主办 | 官方口径 |
| 适用人群 | 多数美国高校要求总分 80-100 分区间 | 按在读年级或报考资格核对 |
| 题型与时长 | 阅读、听力、语法、写作四项,机考为主 | 按科目拆解高频考点 |
| 计分规则 | 各科 0-30 分,总分 120 分制 | 训练得分策略与取舍习惯 |
| 奖项设置 | 不设奖项,成绩作为申请材料之一 | 以当季官方公告为准 |
| 考试时间 | 每月多场,具体场次以官方报名系统为准 | 关注主办方与承办方公告 |
| 报名方式 | 通过 ETS 官方账号报名 | 代报名通常早于官方截止 |
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