托福写作如何做到更简洁

　　托福写作也比较忌讳冗长复杂，简洁明了也可以帮助大家拿到写作的高分。那么如何能够为你的作文减肥，同时拿到考试的高分呢?

　　用一个单词代替一组意义相同的单词刷标题

　　①用forget(忘记)代替do not remember(没有记住)

　　②用ignore(忽视)代替do not payattention to(不注意)

　　③用now(现在)代替at this point intime(此时此刻)

　　④用because(由于)代替due to the fact that(鉴于下列事实)

　　省略同义词或近义词

　　在下面例句中形容词important(重要的)和significant(有重要意义的)，就是两个同义词(也可以说是近义词)，我们可以省略important，只保留significant。

　　①The government project is important and significant.(这项政府计划是重要的，有重要意义。)

　　②The government project is significant.(这项政府计划有重要意义。

　　裁剪单词

　　第三种方法是在不改变句子含义的前提下，省略所有可以省略的单词，比如在下面例句中，the cover of the book (书的封面)可以省略成the book cover，is red in color(是红色的)可以省略成is red。

　　①The cover of the book is red in color.(书的封面是红色的)

　　②The book cover is red.(书的封面是红色的)

　　实战演习

　　最后我们把这三种方法结合起来，将一个冗长、绕嘴的句子，改写成一个简短、易懂的句子。

　　①University malls must be accessible and free from congestion in orderthat students, faculty and employees may have unobstructed passage throughthose areas of the campus.(校内道路必须是便于通行的，不拥堵的，以便让学生、教师和职员能够无阻碍地通过，到达校园的各处。)

　　②University malls must be free enough from congestion to allow peopleto walk through easily.(校内道路不应当拥堵，以便人们顺利通行。)

　　托福写作12个经典论据总结

　　1. The oldest and purest of the arguments for space exploration is theadvancement of science and technology.

　　2. We will go into space, not to bring back things which make usricher or more comfortable here on Earth. We will go there to live and make itour home.

　　3. The exploration to the universe is a high ideal –space truly is thefinal frontier .

　　4. The instinct to explore is fundamentally human; already some of ourmost amazing achievements have taken place in space.

　　5. No one can deny the sense of wonder.

　　6. The exploitation of space has directly changed our world.Satellites orbiting the Earth allow us to communicate instantaneously withpeople on different continents, and to broadcast to people all over the world.

　　7. Weather satellites save lives by giving advance warning of adverseconditions, and together with other scientific instruments in orbit they havehelped us understand our own world better.

　　8. Space exploration is an investment in the future. Our world israpidly running out of resources. Overpopulation could become a seriousworldwide threat.

　　9. Space exploration open us new world and adds to our knowledge,enabling human being to know more about the universe as well as about theearth.

　　10. Space exploration helps to acquire new resources to mitigate theenergy crisis (shortage). There may be some new kinds of natural resource inother planets.

　　11. Space exploration may find new living places for human being tosolve the problem of overpopulation. There is possibility that one day mankindmay emigrate to other planets.

　　12. Space exploration is necessary for future. If we want to progressin the world then we should continue space exploration.